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Northfield Findings Document Review Page 2 <br />December 19, 2007 <br />The remainder of my comments are editorial or typographical errors noted. <br />The page numbering needs to be checked. The numbering repeats following the Table of <br />Contents. <br />In Stipulation No. 1 "Initial" is misspelled at both locations on pages 2 and 16. <br />In the last sentence on gage 16 that includes "Monitoring frequency of these wells will vary <br />dependent, becoming more frequent..." is an improper sentence and should be revised. <br />In the second to last paragraph of page 8 it says "Ocean Wave season" instead of "seam". <br />Also on page 8 {particulazly in the fourth paragraph), the word Formation is used as both capital <br />and lower case. In most instances in this context it should be capitalized. <br />Just as a general comment, the word groundwater is used throughout the document in both a <br />single word an as two words. It's a matter of preference, sometimes when it is used as a modifier <br />it is two words, but there seems to be an inconsistency in this document. I have always used it as <br />one word to keep things simple. Other divisions in our department always use it as two words. <br />So it's a minor point, but I would just be consistent throughout the document. <br />Let me know if you have any questions regarding my review. <br />C: Sandy Brown <br />